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Author's Comments:

Razor
Posted by Razor
December 14th, 2008, 11:02 pm

If this moves too fast, oh well.

I need some help working on blood. I feel like it doesn't look good enough.


Oh yeah, thanks to K I R A, I noticed I put in word bubbles instead of thought bubbles. I'll get around fixing that sooner or later.


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-=Reidy=-
Posted by -=Reidy=-
December 14th, 2008, 11:34 pm

the blood looks fine.



DarkPhoenix
Posted by DarkPhoenix
December 14th, 2008, 11:56 pm

The only problem I see with the blood is the texture, it looks......pudding-ish.

Also, the way it's running down is a little off, looks unatural.

By the way, the sunshine is really good.



WolflanDarkwolf
Posted by WolflanDarkwolf
December 15th, 2008, 1:50 am

I agree with DP need need to work on your textures more. Besides from that it's fine.



Yamataro
Posted by Yamataro
December 15th, 2008, 9:04 am

This looks great! I'll cameo if you want...
Mutsumi-
http://spritehell.smackjeeves.com/comics/408634/my-gfs-updated-sprite-sheet-yamataro/
Me-
http://spritehell.smackjeeves.com/comics/408635/my-sprites-yamataro/

It's an old sheet. I'm working on a new one but just use these for now.



Snurple-the-Hedgehog
Posted by Snurple-the-Hedgehog
December 15th, 2008, 10:42 am

Well... the blood does look fine... but it just needs to look less puddingish.. just like DP said.



Icnos
Posted by Icnos
December 15th, 2008, 1:31 pm

Bloods fine...considering its A FUCKING SPRITE COMIC. Who the hell cares if it looks a lil' weird. I think its fine due to the fact this comic has 3 issues and 60+ fans.



Phiyama
Posted by Phiyama
December 15th, 2008, 8:01 pm

I agree with everyone else
saying that the blood is puddingish...
But like DP said, the Sunlight in the end looks awesome.
and what is going on in that last box?



AnXjak
Posted by AnXjak
December 18th, 2008, 12:45 am

OMG PUDDING- wait..Blood...YAY! lol



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darkthehedgehog53
Posted by darkthehedgehog53
December 18th, 2008, 10:38 pm

cool pretty asome



Leo
Posted by Leo
December 19th, 2008, 12:56 pm

The blood looks fine.



true mercha
Posted by true mercha
December 19th, 2008, 11:46 pm

jam



hurr



XinTrayce
Posted by XinTrayce
December 24th, 2008, 10:24 pm

This is interesting, yet boring at the same time.



(At XinTrayce)

Lugbzurg
Posted by Lugbzurg
January 2nd, 2009, 6:17 pm

How does THAT work?



Yamigo1000
Posted by Yamigo1000
January 5th, 2009, 11:31 am

Epic



Flashlight Antics
Posted by Flashlight Antics
January 9th, 2009, 5:56 pm

Seems interesting. Let's hope it's not another one of those awesome comics that has like, four actual comics and doesn't update except for once in a blue moon on the Thursday that Hitler was born XD

I'll fav it just because it looks interesting.



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August 16th, 2009, 5:04 pm

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NoHeroesLeftInMan
Posted by NoHeroesLeftInMan
August 20th, 2009, 9:06 am

DUDE HOLY SHIT LOOK AT THAT GUEST TROLLING RAZOR EPIC WIN GUISE XD SO TROLLY AND EDGY 10/10



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