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Author's Comments:

Posted by Razor
January 24th, 2009, 9:15 pm

This isn't exactly how I wanted it, since sprites are limited.

Cuz of that, the drama isn't at it's full potentional.


The blood suggesting kinda helped, but I still need work.

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Reader's Comments:

Posted by Ashzamu
January 24th, 2009, 11:23 pm

everyone is so not alive and stuff

Posted by Afroman17
January 25th, 2009, 1:44 am

sorry but too many intensity lines

Posted by RenTech
January 25th, 2009, 9:56 am

I aggree with ray. the third panel really didn't need them.

Whip the Rabbit
Posted by Whip the Rabbit
January 25th, 2009, 11:29 am

Finally, I was wondering what a Taboo was.
Well, that looks pretty awesome, though I agree with the others on the third panel.
Keep up the good work. ^^


Posted by Koren (Guest)
January 25th, 2009, 7:20 pm

Is a "taboo" a kind of curse or something?

Posted by Haro
January 25th, 2009, 9:20 pm

If you did the lines on a separate layer, less opacity would make it look much better.

Posted by Razor
January 25th, 2009, 11:33 pm

It was on a seperate layer, but I could tone down the intensity

NegroFlare the Hedgehog
Posted by NegroFlare the Hedgehog
February 6th, 2009, 11:20 pm

A taboo is a prohibition, something that makes someone forbidden or publically unaccepted.

Posted by Phiyama
February 8th, 2009, 10:15 am

about the blood thing,
i think the blood looks kinda fuzzy and also blood is a little darker than primary red.
well, i think


Floo Phantom
Posted by Floo Phantom
February 8th, 2009, 5:59 pm

Great comic! The blood looked fine to me but the lines could be a little less... intense in the third panel.

Xavier the Fox
Posted by Xavier the Fox
February 12th, 2009, 11:16 pm


Posted by RenTech
February 18th, 2009, 9:50 pm


Posted by darkthehedgehog53
February 21st, 2009, 10:55 am

dude chill it take awhile to update with good effects and if he just updated every day then it wouldn't be that cool cause you want to know and to think what gonna happen next that how a good comic is made

Posted by RenTech
February 24th, 2009, 5:33 am

Hey idiot, I said that cuz it's been like a month. Your logic is fail because if you don't update for months everyone will lose intrest and stop reading...also learn to use the letter "S"

Posted by Razor
February 26th, 2009, 12:09 am

Sorry, I've been busy.

Posted by Goku4123
July 1st, 2009, 1:41 pm

I thinked he was going to see what's happended with the character with tail xD

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